How
important is a name? If the name is the title of a book, or play, a song, a
story, or even a non-fiction article, one would tend to think that it is pretty
important. After all, the title is likely the first thing an audience will see
about the story. In some cases, all the reader knows about the story is the
name until they read it. You could argue that the name or title is the first
piece of marketing.
Shakespeare
had Juliet say, “What’s in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name
would smell as sweet.” In other words, if instead of calling it a rose, you
called it a skunkflower, it would still look and smell like a rose. The name
does not change it. Did Shakespeare believe names were unimportant? Further,
Shakespeare gave seemingly trivial names to three of his better comedies: Much
Ado About Nothing, As You Like it, and What you Will. These names do not say
anything about what the plays are about. They almost sound like he is saying,
“these plays of mine are probably a waste of your time.” (What You Will, is better known by its
alternate title: Twelfth Night, though even that title doesn’t tell you
anything about the play). I don’t think Shakespeare thought titles were
unimportant. He penned some good evocative titles too. Perhaps he just did not
feel those comedies were as important as some of his other works, or maybe he
was just rushed to come up with a title. I have to say that all three of these
sound to me like working titles; like he was going to replace them with
something better, but somehow never got around to it.
When I am
writing a story, sometimes I come up with the title first and it becomes the
inspiration for the story. But more often I write the story and then have to
come up with a title after it is finished or almost finished. Sometimes I will
pick a line from the story that seems to sum it up. Other times it is just a
word or phrase that captures the feeling. Sometimes I want a title to be
poetic. Other times, keeping it simple seems best. As I mentioned last week, I
have written a play for our local theater company for a Christmas show (yes it
was accepted and will be performed along with several others in December). The
play had been finished for several days, but all of a sudden I realized the
deadline was upon me and I had to come up with a title like now. It is a
Christmas play but no titles that sounded Christmassy seemed to fit. For a long
time I toyed with the title: “Einstein’s Third Law of Elevators”. I liked that
title, but it seemed a bit much, and it was about as far away from Christmas as
you could get. But I needed something right now! “Elevator Time” popped into my
brain. The cast spends time in an elevator . . . meh. I wrote it on the form and sent it in.
It seemed kind of generic and also not Christmassy, but at least it was short
and to the point. Then, after I had submitted it, I got to thinking about it
and realized that “Elevator Time” actually is a good title. It works on more
than one level, which is a good thing for a title to achieve.
A good example
of working on multiple levels is the song title “For Good” from the musical
Wicked. The characters are saying that they have been changed ‘for good’,
meaning changed permanently, but also meaning changed in a way to choose to be good.
Also the characters who are singing it are friends saying goodbye ‘for good’. Such
a simple title, just two words, yet brilliant.
What’s in a
name? A whole world.
(My novel Star Liner,
is now available as an ebook through Copypastapublishing.com, or the other
usual online sources. For those who like to turn physical pages, the paperback
will be out soon).
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